So many lunches –
A comfortable friendship ~
Use our mitts to eat.
Outside, time is passing by ~
and to each, their own moment.
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Grateful acceptance of Poetry Palace award for week 54.
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/10/perfect-poet-award-week-54.html
I wish to nominate ‘Halfway Between The Gutter And The Stars’ for the next award. ‘We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the kerb.’
http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/
Last of ten poems on the theme of ‘Hands’. This theme could go on and on…
Lovely 🙂 I much prefer shorter poems, and you’ve done a good job of summing up a scene in a few words. I really like this.
Very nice.
Loved that last line especially.
Nice and subtle, Good work.
I love this as time passes by and you are in your own world to eat and savor the moment
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/20/taken-from-me-on-halloween-night/
cool sentiments, well said.
🙂
Nice 🙂
One of my friends eats salad with her hands–this reminded me of that 🙂
Thanks for all the comments, much appreciated.
You do these short poems so well!
you speak some truth here, well done.
Join poets rally tomorrow again,
bless you.