Ruins, in mid air –
Later cleared away ~ all pieces –
Big things are pulled down –
Evil men act, in strange thoughts –
The Good will rebuild.
Debris, falling slow –
We don’t want it to happen –
but it’s live, it’s news.
Transience ~ who knows?
When he leaves in the morning –
Kiss him, kiss goodbye.
Long lines donating –
Unheard of blood-groups emerge –
We are together.
8 thoughts on “The First Tower”
love the message in it, well done.
You gave us such a wonderful message and so well done thank you
hate 911 and that idiot osama! from me
Nice message of peace, unity and solidarity in the face of adversity:)
Thank you for this. Ten years on, I no longer feel anger toward those responsible. I only feel sad.
Sad for those who lost their lives, and sad that even now the situation still has not been resolved.
Love the second to last stanza–so much packed inside.
humanity unites in times of peril. nicely done.
here is my entry: http://wp.me/pTDjw-qx
Thanks for the comments.